Draft Midterm

Hi Gang!

I know you guys are probably frantically researching and writing as I have this week.  I’ve attached a very rough draft of my midterm.  I read over the instructions several times and looked at the examples, and I decided to go with a more personal approach.  If you have time, take a look and let me know your thoughts!  If you post yours, I’ll do the same!

Jim

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About leadingcops

Greetings! I am a 20 year law enforcement veteran, with most of my time spent training peace officers. I started in patrol and have worked a range of assignments, including Internal Affairs and Risk Management before I took over as commander of our regional academy program. Please let me know if there is anything I can assist with during this class!
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5 Responses to Draft Midterm

  1. leadingcops says:

    I was thinking the same thing! I’ve trimmed it up by about a page, tks for the review!

  2. Christine says:

    Jim, I just started taking a look at it. Do you plan to synthesize it down a little bit? Dr. Khalsa keeps reminding me that we should be looking at 2-3 pages as an ideal length.

    *Christine

  3. Kathi says:

    Jim,
    I’m just finishing up my draft and I’ll look yours over. You and Tish are, definitely, on the ball!! You’re both great and I appreciate our group to help with reviewing/editing/suggestions.

    Thanks so much,

    Kathi

    • leadingcops says:

      Tks Kathi! Send yours my way as well!

      • Kathi says:

        Jim,

        I’ve been reading your midterm, and I think that Christine was “on to” something. Maybe you could go through each paragraph and summarize/trim to shorten the length without deleting much info…just a thought.

        You always do fabulous work and I’m sure this will pull together great!!

        Kathi

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