Hi Gang!
I know you guys are probably frantically researching and writing as I have this week. I’ve attached a very rough draft of my midterm. I read over the instructions several times and looked at the examples, and I decided to go with a more personal approach. If you have time, take a look and let me know your thoughts! If you post yours, I’ll do the same!
Jim
4ging Ahead! 
I was thinking the same thing! I’ve trimmed it up by about a page, tks for the review!
Jim, I just started taking a look at it. Do you plan to synthesize it down a little bit? Dr. Khalsa keeps reminding me that we should be looking at 2-3 pages as an ideal length.
*Christine
Jim,
I’m just finishing up my draft and I’ll look yours over. You and Tish are, definitely, on the ball!! You’re both great and I appreciate our group to help with reviewing/editing/suggestions.
Thanks so much,
Kathi
Tks Kathi! Send yours my way as well!
Jim,
I’ve been reading your midterm, and I think that Christine was “on to” something. Maybe you could go through each paragraph and summarize/trim to shorten the length without deleting much info…just a thought.
You always do fabulous work and I’m sure this will pull together great!!
Kathi